Reminds me of Suzanne Pleshette, who is probably before your time! I like the overall look; sort of pixie-ish.

The face position looks fine, but the taper on the side of the neck,
just below the ear, is somehow wrong.  Should either taper
outward toward the trapezoid, or be pulled in as I've done with
Photoshop here.

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