There is that funky dent on the eye -

The nose has more of a point, and a tad more flare to the nostril

And that area of the cheek looks like fat is kinda sticking out, the kind old aunts like to pinch- the model is smooth there.

PLEASE point out anything else you see as off - icredibly brutal critizism (sic...) is much appreciated here as I want to get as CLOSE as possible to this.

And any advice on how to change the errors I already mentioned will help greatly - or advice on how I can post in the actual apollo forum.
Thanks much

I am:  aka Velocity3d