Excellent job! I've always found those tooth fairies a rather sinister lot. I mean, how can you really trust anyone who's constantly sneaking into the rooms of little children? Great job of telling a tale through rhyme. It scans nicely and holds up well from beginning to end.

Well off to contemplate raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens...

~jon

 
~jon
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