Gunna add some more input to this.

I strongly strongly agree with what has been said about you needing to take V4 away from being V4.  That character I could easily make myself in a few minutes.  Think about why would I purchase it then?  Now go onto another character that I LOVE - Nanette (DMs).  I would have to seriously spend some time to recreate her - and to get to the level of her textures might not be possible for me - there for buying her was $$ well spent.

My point is you can't put something out there that someone can do for themselves and expect it to go.  Especially by Daz.  Some research helps TONS.  I'm sure you have already but take a look at other eyes out there.  Look for ones which you think are fantastic - then compare them to yours.  LOOK for the differences.  Matte is a flat look - without shinyness or glossiness.

I do like the character - she has a certain pocohantos beauty about her which I adore - shes just not there yet.  Try some long hair maybe - I don't know she just really needs alot more oomph.

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