I like the shot and all but I think what brings it down is the thing with the sky there... it just feels like it's not part of it... see how it's got that line between it and the rest? At first I wasn't sure if you had put something like a burn layer over to get detail back... but anyway still like it.. here's my version if that's ok...

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