Hi Bagginsbill. I have wrote about my kidney failure a while ago and had the same problems, soooo much info. I found concentrating on one aspect at a time helps. You may need to sort out just what you want/need to show and see if they can fall into chapters logically/progressively. Maybe have a chat to the writers forum if it helps. IM me if you want to, I am only a newbie at it but I do know the frustrations of starting out. Jen