hdaggers opened this issue on Aug 27, 2007 ยท 7 posts
hdaggers posted Tue, 04 September 2007 at 12:05 PM
I think it proves that a compelling story doesn't need every Hollywood bell&whistle. Even though this feels almost like an illustrated storybook instead of an animated movie, I think there is much to learn.... The mystery is a hook that keeps you interested, for a while at least. I couldn't watch every episode. It feels pretty obvious -- the trek across the US implies at least 5 or 6 more "seasons", but they really have to step it up to keep my attention. So far there have been no big revelations and the cliches are overpowering, especially in 2-3 min webisodes.... I live in NYC and believe me, if everyone disappeared tomorrow no one would be shacking up in tents in Central Park! har har.
What I don't like is the overkill narration from the generic "white guy". There's an old saying in script writing: "Show me, don't tell me." Take a look at the StarTrek Aurora. Waay better scripts, interesting "alternative" characters (2 women in space with different personalities) and just a lot more attention to letting the video carry the message through action, rather than having a generic businessman white guy talk you to death. He says he "sold technology to the world" -- what does that mean, he worked at Radio Shack?? The StarTrek genre should be played out, but Aurora's story so much better than Afterworld's "original" story.