Thanks for the kind words, Suzanne. It's always good to get at least three people for a challenge. Maybe we'll pick up a few more before midrael unsticks this thread and opens the next. Hope so. Your poem certainly captured the essence of a nightmare, and I loved the ending.

It's harder for me to comment on Fall into Sleep, as it is such poignant and deeply personal piece. Unfortunately, not all nightmares occur in our sleep. My heart goes out to you, R2B, and your daughter.

~jon

 
~jon
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