bclaytonphoto opened this issue on Dec 08, 2007 · 33 posts
inshaala posted Sun, 09 December 2007 at 3:44 AM
Valerie - The language used is is very "high-brow", and the turn of phrase long winded using concepts which are extremely abstract to describe something rather simple. Here is the definition of pretentious:
pretentious adj 1 pompous, self-important or foolishly grandiose. 2 phoney or affected. 3 showy; ostentatious.
And here is just one example of over-doing it (imo the whole article is but here is just one phrase)::
But it is a picture of a peculiar kind: simultaneous release from, and anchorage to, the “out there” on which it ineluctably depends, gives it its power.
I'm a native english speaker just graduated from uni (where style of writing does border on this), and i have no idea firstly what "ineluctably" means without looking it up nor really what he is getting at. The syntax and punctuation/grammar stink of the archaic (hard to explain why on a linguistic level without writing an essay), which is all i really needed to point out to show this guy is being "foolishly grandiose" as per the definition.
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