Forum: Writers


Subject: Writing "As seen on tv" without sounding tacky?/writing for a target audience

Shoshanna opened this issue on Dec 04, 2007 ยท 7 posts


jstro posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 5:14 PM

How about something like this:

Our work was featured on [Channel]'s [Show Name] on [Date], highlighting the type of customizations we can bring to the most demanding jobs.

For example:

Our work was featured on BBC1's Incredible Workovers, last August the 24th. The show highlighted the exceptional workmanship we put into even the most demanding of home remodeling and customization jobs done in the area. Imagine what we can do for you.

Good luck with your business. Too bad you don't do work in the States. God knows, we could use some. ;-)
~jon

 
~jon
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