Zanzo opened this issue on Feb 24, 2008 ยท 32 posts
pjz99 posted Sun, 24 February 2008 at 9:20 PM
Composition wise:
Offset the camera a bit, too perfectly centered (rule of thirds)
Crop is too tight up around the head
Lighting on the figure doesn't seem to match the practical lighting of the room all that well - always a problem, and many people here just ignore it altogether, but if you want to try to fix it, use fewer cheater lights or try to align the cheater lights to other expected sources of light in the room eg. the lamp
Perspective distortion is a little strong, consider using a bigger focal length (80 or 100 perhaps)
For the character:
Nose is way too small even for a female, and if this is supposed to be a shemale, you probably want the nose a bit bigger still (male nose tends to be a bit larger).