Oops, when I said "crop is too tight" I didn't mean the hair, I mean the composition (framing).  The top of the character's head is too tight against the edge of the frame, making the composition look cramped imo.  The hair actually looks quite fine to me, although imo most transvestites/transsexuals tend to go further out of their way to avoid "boyish" or "butch" looks, so some more girly looking hair may be a better choice.

For ongoing stuff you probably do want to place this in the Critique forum, as you'll get responses from a bigger cross section of people here rather than just the Poser fans.

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