Forum: Poser - OFFICIAL


Subject: Need Critique - Character Sydney - (Transexual ) (Warning)

Zanzo opened this issue on Feb 24, 2008 · 32 posts


Zanzo posted Wed, 27 February 2008 at 12:41 AM

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  1. I had a few other people look at it. It seems that wall texture was just way too loud. So I changed it to a basic home style wallpaper.
  2. I also re-did the lighting completely and removed that pink/orange color that the character was experiencing. Skin has more spots/freckles now. I re-did the lighting after reading some light tutorials  that were provided earlier in this thread.  I'm using 6 lights now instead of 10 previously.
  1. Stronger ambient occlusion on the walls and floor.  Not sure if it is too much or not.
    4.  I also re-arranged some stuff based on previous suggestions.
  2. Placed the camera in a way where the character is more on the left.
  3. Added a rug to the floor.
  4. Made the clock look more traditional/old.

Either I really messed up and went two steps back or I improved. I'm hoping I improved. As always be brutally honest.   Trash it if you have to. I really need to know where I stand.  I'm not sure if it is too dark?

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