Forum: Poser - OFFICIAL


Subject: Need Critique - Character Sydney - (Transexual ) (Warning)

Zanzo opened this issue on Feb 24, 2008 · 32 posts


Acadia posted Wed, 27 February 2008 at 1:06 AM

It's looking good! :)  Great improvements.  I particularly like the full body shot.

The elbow joint in the mirror reflectionneeds to be smoothed in post work in order to get rid of that awkward bend at the inner elbow.

The room looks too "sterile"  and the tables to empty.  The room needs more clutter. He is on his way to becoming a woman so why not have some cosmetics on the desk, or instead of the desk one of those dressing room vanities with the lights around it. Maybe some clothing draped carelessly on the furniture too? What about some vibrant coloured throw cushions on the furniture, maybe some statues on the tables and/or floor.  I also think that the full body image needs something on the wall to the figure's left.  Not a duplicate painting, but some object in order to break up that large space... which is why I was thinking of a vanity instead of a desk.

"It is good to see ourselves as others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to say." - Ghandi