Forum: Writers


Subject: Lyric Poetry Valentine Challenge

jstro opened this issue on Feb 01, 2008 ยท 17 posts


EagleWing1000 posted Thu, 13 March 2008 at 12:19 PM

Quote - These are the vows that I read at my wedding this summer. A Traditional ceremony on the rez.

A Vow

Great Spirit wrote your name on my heart
before it's first beat

Your touch was on my skin
before I could feel

Your song filled my ears
before I ever heard

Your smile shone in my eyes
before I ever saw

Your desire was known to me
before I knew want

Your dreams were mine
before I ever slept

Your love was deep in my soul
before there was time

Your Spirit is connected with mine through Eternity

I Love You

(c)netsia

VERY VERY true, you certainly know what love is, i'm sure the special person you wrote this for cried happiness, congratulations.

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