The more light, of this scene looks much better; but I would encourage you to go further.  I'm almost certain She's a Spot light on her face?  That level of light looks good, but then I want ion her whole body.  Try using Infinite lights?

I like th pose on the left; her hip is very attractive, and her torso looks to be almost lunging to find an unexpected surprise.  It make me want to know what she's found.