aegipan opened this issue on Mar 23, 2008 · 14 posts
TomDart posted Tue, 25 March 2008 at 6:21 PM
Aegy, on the "rule of constrasts" page you say: "...if the contrast is strong it will works. And you've caught the viewer's attention without he didn't notice anything."
In English, at least American English, this will be better understood as: ..if the contrast is stong it will work(singlular word). ..caught the viewer's attention without him noticing anything.
You did ask for possible language corrections. I know we align words differently for the same meaning. The meaning is clear in your version but what I have said is more accurate to English.
In truth, your tut is already very helpful and well done. Tom.