Forum: Writers


Subject: The Drawing

arrowhead42 opened this issue on Mar 24, 2008 ยท 32 posts


arrowhead42 posted Sat, 05 April 2008 at 9:33 AM

Wow - what a coincidence that I'm writing about Nebraska and you'll be traveling out there! I was stationed in eastern Nebraska from 1996-1999, just across the river from Iowa. Never made it to the western portion, which is where I was trying to describe. I've seen pics and heard descriptions though, and it sounds so barren and pretty. Much like the pictures I've seen of the great plains in South Dakota - so open, and so beautiful! Isn't that where you're from?
Over the next few installments of the story, please do me a favor and be very critical - I've only got a few more chapters actually written, and I had a difficult time with them. I know where I want the story to go, but getting there is strange and difficult. The whole idea of how the character takes these journeys of the mind seems a bit cheesy to me, but what can I say? The story has taken on a life of its own.
Anyway, enjoy your travels - be safe out on the road, and thanks again for reading!

Steve

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