Ra3vyn opened this issue on Mar 07, 2008 · 88 posts
hauksdottir posted Sat, 05 April 2008 at 7:06 PM
OK, my votes...
Exquisite work... and that car is so isolated that there isn't even a track of a road back to civilization.
I live with a constant migraine, and pain isolates a person by keeping them from being fully human and in the human community... especially if the source of the pain isn't obvious. The red skeleton conveys this effectively working with the words.
The poem is very strong. Even in a shared bed, you can be alone.
Atlas is definitely a solitary figure, with the weight of the world at war on his shoulders. Yet he still stands upright. He doesn't just drop the ball and walk back to his buddies.
A very nice showing all around with many good entries.
Carolly