Forum: Poser - OFFICIAL


Subject: Wip part 4 what you think so far

dolly opened this issue on Jun 17, 2001 ยท 7 posts


hauksdottir posted Sun, 17 June 2001 at 2:28 PM

I'm going to make a couple of small suggestions. 1)The model on the stairs, right side: I'd lower her arms (maybe with a hand thrown over the face if you want to differentiate sides). 2)Winged women on the mushroom-ish props: I would twist their torsos towards the door and angle/scoop the wings, maybe with outside wings up and completely within frame of view, so as to lead the eye towards the focal point. (Whereever the eye wanders, it ought to come back to that door!) 3)The figures on the door itself don't quite balance visually. If the guy on the left was twisted further out, or had an arm extended, there would be a bit more weight there. The hips aren't the same distance out from center, so weighting them is tricky. 4)When you texture it, you may wish to show lots of wear in the middle of the steps, because lots of people have passed that way? Otherwise, it is way cool (ot hot as the case may be) and you are doing a great job with it. Carolly