That looks great, Fugazi.. a really nice, sexy dress.
It's difficult to tell from this angle, but the neckline looks a little peculiar to me. I would either lower the front of the neckline slightly, or, probably better for this style, make the sides a bit higher. But it might look different from another angle.
The overlap down the front looks a bit flat in this picture - could you put bump/displacement there to give the effect of a real overlap?
Hope this helps!
Izi

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Mr Otsuka, the old black tomcat in Kafka on the Shore (Haruki Murakami)