the picture is nice but the sun center strick is a bit agressive. I am tempted to look more at the sprinkler jet in the sun and the background but the sun stop us doing so...You could had wait that the sun move to the rigth to bring the sun to relfect and remove the ligth pole or flag pole on the rigth. Or have move past the car and get a composition under the water jet and maybe get a rainbow. (actually not yourself under the jet but by zooming in) If it whasnt of the ligth cutting the picture in half it whould have been really great.