Forum: Poser - OFFICIAL


Subject: Wow what did I do wrong on this image?

Vile opened this issue on Oct 29, 2008 · 18 posts


SeverD posted Fri, 31 October 2008 at 12:51 AM

Constructive crits - the background is way too "loud".  It SCREAMS for attention when you want your viewers eye to be drawn to the figures face an the crystal ball.  You are also ignoring the fact that the bright light from the merry go round is your pictures KEY light source. 

As a quick fix, try throwing a layer of scary fog between your figure and the merry go round.  This will soften the "loudness" of the background and create the seperation you need.  Paint a strong rim light on your main figure to acknowledge the light from the merry go round.

As to getting comments, like the previous poster said, your subject matter is not nearly naked enough, nor nearly it is female enough.

Gabriel Sabloff
TIRADE STUDIOS