Definite improvement. Also to note: The point of the nose on the model droops down below the level of the nostrils - not so in the photo. The eyebrows (sure you already saw it) The jawline on teh model isn't quite right. The 'corner' that is made from the jawbone joint is too low, and the edge of the face from the jawbone up to the ear is too long. Also, the pic is less straight in that area. It's not the cheekbones, because they look fine on the right edge. It's something further back along the head, visible on the left side of the photo. The bridge of the nose in the pic looks a little rounder too, but that may just be lighting. All in all, you're getting close. Better than I could do.