Over all it's pretty cool but I found the black edits of up to 2  or 3 seconds to be quite distracting. Also i personally would have made that checkerboard tile floor a much larger scale. It seems out of proportion to the rest of the room and the small size is giving you the crawlies all over the floor.

 

Once in a while I look around,
I see a sound
and try to write it down
Sometimes they come out very soft
Tinkling light sound
The Sun comes up again