Quote - First, write as normal sentences and paragraphs. it's a bit confusing trying to read the way you have it.

Not impossible though. I saw this as the result of translating software. I know when I need Japanese or similar, I keep to short, single sentences, too :)

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You just can't put the words "Poserites" and "happy" in the same sentence - didn't you know that? LaurieA
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