I think the extra details really add a lot.  Good job there.

 

Here are some more observations.

For the lights you might consider doing something that looks like banks of lights and then hanging them from the roof like your current lights or placing them near the tops of the walls angled downward light stadium lights.

 

For some ideas about the hanger doors you might want to Google images of the new Cowboys stadium.  Not only does it have a huge movable roof but also one end of the stadium opens up with a bunch of sliding panels.

 

The horizontal placement of the windows looks a bit haphazard to me.

 

It seems to me the bay has a lot of wasted floor space for an area devoted to take offs and landings.  You might consider adding support columns in the wasted space in the middle of the bay, maybe even having another “airboss station” wrapped around or built into one.

Why if the bay roof so high?  Because anything that needs that much head room is not getting in through any of the doors.

 

Regarding the material on the walls, I don’t like the way the highlights and shadows of the material ignore the contours of the walls.

And please feel free to ignore any or all of my comments as it suits you

Chris Cox