Tebop, if it is okay for you, can you give us your story's pitch?

Pitch means the WHOLE SUMMARY and DESCRIPTION of the story in ONE sentence.

That's what screen play writers do to get the attention of Hollywood producers and agents. Your pitch should be interesting enough and who knows, somebody in the forums might help you out.

Example:

If I am the one who wrote the classic movie: The Godfather by Mario Puzo, my pitch will be:

The Godfather is a crime drama of an American Mafia Don's struggle to protect his family and interests from his enemies using Sicilian cloak and dagger methods when loyalties have been betrayed by the greed of its own members causing hardship, bloodshed and destruction to all parties and ultimately gave way to the rise of a new don that lorded above all the families.

This might not be the best example. But I hope you get the idea.

Passion is anger and love combined. So if it looks angry, give it some love!