I agreee that the composition ins't that great, but 1st things 1st, you need some SHADOWS....

2nd, the highest area of contrast in a picture will natually be a focal point, ie, the center of intrest. Your highest area of contrast is the chrome rim on black rubber. Tone down the rim reflect and zoom in to get more of the girl (and not some much car like muralist said) if that is where you want people to focus. (No way the rim is going to be that bright in a dark scene like you got goin on here)

3rd, I suggest looking up "the rule of 3rds" or "the golden rule" for art to get a better understanding of how to frame a scene. It would help!

But I do think Murlist has a valid point. The pic doesnt really tell a story. WHy is she barefoot with a gun, in a hot pink dress, next to a car, in the dark, ...etc, etc.............

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