In addition to some of the above comments...The wheel is to bright. It pulls your eye towards the wheel. Never seen a brake caliper that is that reflective on the street Car shows, maybe. Dull down the caliper, even if you change the scene composition. You have a dark car, semi dark ground, then a chrome gun, car wheel and the caliper that over power the character and her clothes. 

Gary

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