Well I've been thru your gallery and my 2 comments other that erosiart's comment on quality would be...more grunge, small scale chaos/dirtyness and soft shadows would help nearly every one but awesonme work for the short time you seem to have been working with Bryce.. ...

 

Once in a while I look around,
I see a sound
and try to write it down
Sometimes they come out very soft
Tinkling light sound
The Sun comes up again