I really like the composition of this image. I agree that the top right is a bit blown out. When you fix that ; ) you might try to burn the bright spots in the upper left corner too. I might also try to darken some of those other bright spots on the dark background. You wouldn't have to overdo it, just dark enough to not be as distracting. As it is now, I want to look at the palm frond but my eye keeps darting around to those other areas. Just something to mess around with. All in all this is a very nice image, and I think it is worth it to keep working with it.