oh i only now see the second one. That looks quite good! I dont think that one is too transparent anymore now.

If i have to guess a setup off the top of my head i would do the follwoing:

• 1 render with too much transparency, and exagerated transparent color
• 1 render without transparency, and a normal skin color

then i would set it up in photoshop

• translucent render at the bottom, on normal mode
• normal non-translucent render on top, on luminosity mode
• normal non-translucent render on top, on color mode (or alternatively you could split this in one for hue, and one for saturation, if needed)

Then from there i would tweak the transparency of the top two layers to let some of the overly translucent render shine through from underneith. You could also use a mask to selectively favour, or disfavour translucency in certain areas.

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