Awesome first upload.

I like the scene. The poses and the other things that were mentioned are things you'll get better with the more you use it.  For me it's always about the creativity and how I respond to a picture and when I saw this one was like "What's up with that bear" ha ha ha.. The bear definitely looks juiced. (drunk).  I don't know if that's the look you were going for but it worked for me.

Great job. I think the girl should be really concern about that bear though. ha ha ha.