Looking good...I as well have a really hard time making room for more than the forum with Bryce....and I'm not complaining cuz it's my music reclaiming it's rightful territory...
re: the image...the foreground objects seem too in focus, like they're under a spotlight...I'd experiment with lighting and maybe a volumetric fog object

 

Once in a while I look around,
I see a sound
and try to write it down
Sometimes they come out very soft
Tinkling light sound
The Sun comes up again