Paul Francis opened this issue on Sep 15, 2010 ยท 50 posts
ockham posted Thu, 16 September 2010 at 10:16 AM
I see no spelling errors and only one grammatical problem:
*This "hardware acceleration" makes web pages more nimble and behave more like software running directly on the computer.
I'd rewrite it like this:
This "hardware acceleration" makes web pages more nimble, so they behave more like software running directly on the computer.