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To go...boldly where no one has gone before.

Sounds much better, doesn't it?

Whilst it works better grammatically, It doesn't sound better, because changing it messes up the meter-it's blank verse...

Blank verse or not, the original always sounds like sand in the gearbox to me.  Besides which, it's not supposed to be poetry.  

Coppula eam se non posit acceptera jocularum.

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