Quote - It looks nice, but the ending was all wrong.

In the absence of any further explanation, I can only interpret this as: had you been the storyteller you would have told a different story.
I can't argue with that. :O)

"If I were a shadow, I know I wouldn't like to be half of what I should be."
Mr Otsuka, the old black tomcat in Kafka on the Shore (Haruki Murakami)