interesting video and use of poser i did like the cell shaded look that was going on....

As for the song itself, i couldnt make out most of the lyrics, the vocals are way too soft and the music itself drowns out the lyrics making most of them very hard to make out.(im not hard of hearing i just find it very difficult to focus and listen to softer sounds when they are combined with louder sounds)

For your next song i would recommending making the lyrics more stand out and listenable since its the lyrics that is important to rap style music.