gsalas opened this issue on Aug 11, 2001 ยท 8 posts
hauksdottir posted Sat, 11 August 2001 at 11:53 PM
Gabe, I like the atmosphere and the thought. The elbow that she is leaning on looks almost like 2 elbows with that lighting, and there is no cast shadow on the bark of the tree, so it doesn't look like it is touching. Her fingers might be darker, too, less distracting. The orange lens flare in the tree just to the left of her head is distracting, also. The horizon line is not level. Added to the line of the tie across her back, it is a bit unsettling. I'd fix the horizon first of all, since you want this to be a peaceful image, then touch up anything else which distracts from it. Carolly