You know? I can't really fault this, but perhaps changing the POV to brig the fairy into the centre of the piece and changing the ground texture to something green and grassy might improve it.

Hope this helps.

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...