Fidelity2 opened this issue on Apr 26, 2011 · 18 posts
Rich_Potter posted Tue, 26 April 2011 at 12:28 PM
Hi Fidelity,
Firstly, your artwork is NOT awful. far from it in fact, your star trek pictures are, for the most part really very good, you certainly have your own style, and I admire that. Some of your Cinema 4D work is very good too, again in your own style, I particularly enjoyed your latest "Untitled" its obscure, yes, but its also interesting to look at.
Honestly, the thing I think you need to improve in your vue renders is lighting. For the most part I observe that your renders are mostly overlit, or have odd atmospheres which tends to bug me in a way.
I also find it hard to understand what you mean with your pictures, for example in "I Am Going Crazy" you have created what I would describe as a wonderfully abstract piece, but I dont understand what your intentions where with its design, this is the second thing that bugs me.
Overall, I would say you could improve on two points.
1:- Atmosphere and Lighting
2:- Descriptions of what you intend with each piece
I have been following your work for some time, and viewed most of your pieces. I cant think of any tutorials specifically that you could look at for now, but if i find any I think you might enjoy ill certainly forward them to you.
Keep up the good work!
Rich