not bad, fracture! i like especially the face expression of the yellowhead. few things: - that space ship on the right is too much. it disturbs the whole composition. - the shockwaves are a bit too edgy - maybe a case for postproduction? - eye tends to go to the center of the waves and then goes back to the other woman up left, then goes back and so forth. i would put her somewhere near the yellowhead, because as it is now, she attracts too much attention (partly being hidden behind the shockwave...