Francis, actually that is pretty good for a second try. I enjoy the surreal quality to it, with the giant clock and the men moving past in the background. I laughed when the beetle came out of the van. Giving more life to the singer will help in future animations (facial expressions, body movement) as will changing the background and camera angle. I think creating an animation like this gives you an appreciation of what skills are required of a movie/music video director. Keep at it, and don't let certain people who do not create but only criticize get in your way!