With the red under her eyes, she looks like an addict, or something. So while you are pulling the eyeshadow away from her nose, you might tone that down a bit, too. I agree that the eye color is too bright. Some people think piercing eyes are mesmerizing; I think they are fake. (IMHO) When you get to the mouth remove the gloss, and let users add highlights with proper lighting. It is possible that the map and the morph don't quite agree? There is a slight hollow under the nose called the philtrum, and it shapes the upper lip. When you paint the lipstick a bit over the guidelines, it ought to cover the black, and it ought to be slightly bowed on top. Hope this helps. I don't intend to be critical. Carolly