I agree...... not a very successful page layout, but very good photos. A very simple layout suggestion..... try to make it(layout) more symetrical. This will give it more balance. Also the text would be better off as colums under each photo. Add the title into the main body of text. This way one could use it like a 2 page magazine spread with the gutter in the middle, no text or image interrupted. Are you making a spread? or just messing aroung learning new things? Keep it up, and send eveeryone a copy when printed : )