Hello. First, you have a good idea. The man's expression is fine. Here are some flaws: - realism: Woman texture, hair, dress is photorealistic, man clothing is not so photorealistic. The floor texture is not photorealistic, and the doors are cartoon-like. - Nothing can be seen behind glass doors. Bryce has wonderful skies for example. - the room seems empty except for the two tables, it's unusual. - Also atthisstage is right, the man's pose is odd. try to take this pose yourself, you'll find it very uncomfortable. - Also a bit more texturing on man's uniform would have been appreciated as the woman dress has so much details. It's a good idea, and there is some work in this picture. Yes, your concept is good, I would add every idea is called "creativity" if you're skilled (computer-generated pictures are needing a lot of technical knowladge) enough to render it in a nice-looking picture. Keep up the good work !