logan looking great a few things possibly to help though it looks really good already you may want to throw a quick sketch of your character in the background alot of times doing freestyle its easy to loose your proportions ex. arms compared to head or in my case making eyes to big or nose to small it looks as if yours is proportioned pretty good but i agree with teyon you may want to make the head a little bigger or upper chest and arms a little smaller unless this is the look your going for you have some major impressive points on this model though 2 that stand out to me is the back of the forearm (often overlooked by others ) the fat layer covering the mid back and backof the head and hat just watch your poportions and keep posting its easy to miss what others catch when youve been staring at it for a long time trust me !! so keep posting later great stuff lets see more!