I did not read it but skimmed through the pages because I am looking for something.

Just what I thought.

I have perhaps a reasonable suggestion.

I think your comic Busy Day is a "one shot" comic. That means the kids will have the impression to expect nothing more after turning off their tablets.

There is no more "demand" after you closed the book.

I believe its very important for the success of any book is to not to be forgotten by promising that there is more to come.

I love your online comics because there is something for me to look forward to and most of all, the ADVENTURE!

I suggest you stick to make adventure stories since you are good at it and then tone it down that the kids will be able to appreciate it.

Make every page a page turner and at the end page a TO BE CONTINUED and then a full page ad of your other titles with a catchy description of what its all about.

 

If you do these then you can deal with moms like RedPhantom gracefully because she will have no choice but to give in with her kids demands to get your new comic since they are showing great interest to read.

Just look at Harry Potter. Its not a one shot thing. Its a book series. Give them something to look forward to and stick with what you know.

Passion is anger and love combined. So if it looks angry, give it some love!