Okay, just to address a few issues pointed out already,

1. The typo- caught it myself, but when you've been stariung at something for hours it's a lot of little things you just don't catch at first.

2. Prayers- Can't please everyone.

3. Second scene in the park- not a photo hack. It was the DAZ Cyclorama. It's somewhat dated I suppose though, so maybe I can do something about that.

4. Landscape- If there's a problem for some folks to read it that way, I can do it portrait style. Not a problem, and a good point for me to consider.

5. Please remember that this is only a first rough draft for both the writing and the artwork.

6. It's not meant to be a comic, but I get the point.

 

Now to address something specific that Red Phantom pointed out:

"Speaking as a preschool teacher, it probably would not be very popular. The idea that 2 young kids would be allowed to go down the streeet alone would cause a scandle."

Ahh, I guess times have changed. When I was a kid I was all over my neighborhood. Of course, everybody knew who I was and who my mother was so if I did anything to get in trouble you could be sure she would hear about it.

Still, I get the point and I thought that by pointing out that the playground was just down the street it meant that they were close to home. They didn't even have to cross the street. Not like when I was a kid, I crossed streets, railroad tracks, branches and streams. I made Tom Sawyer look homebound.